not great
i think what i liked about this song was in the unpredictabilty of the chord movements, i hate it when a song is so obvious that you can listen to it and hear exactly what is about to happen. however the constant piercing synthesiser sound made it generally quite annoying.
you're on the right tracks but next time try to make a bit of a softer leading part for the ears :P
unfortunately, not deserving of the top 5